Avenue Primary – Seaside Adventure

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Nathan has wow-ed me with his writing in this seaside story! I’m impressed with his use of commas to mark clauses and the verbs he has chosen to engage the reader. He has used his planning work perfectly to help write his final piece and should be very proud of his effort!
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  1. A delightful adventure story – be proud of yourself, Nathan. Super writing!

  2. daviesjonny (United Kingdom) on said:

    I can’t believe you are only in year 3 Nathan! What an incredibly exciting piece of writing! You have set your writing out in brilliant paragraphs, used extremely neat handwriting and included some fantastic word choices! Well done!