Spooky Setting Description, by Ethan

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Ethan has used a range of powerful vocabulary and interesting openers to create a vivid and very scary setting description. He has been working so hard to achieve his Literacy target (to use a range of sentence structures for effect) and I think he has definitely done it here. Keep trying hard Ethan a – it’s definitely paying off! Miss Smith.

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  1. enniston85 on said:

    You have done an excellent job of building tension using description. I am sharing this with my Year 6 class tomorrow!

  2. Excellent job of building tension, coupled with some interesting descriptions. Keep on writing!

  3. Ooooh. Spine chilling setting Ethan. A truly creeptastic setting description!!

  4. highgate on said:

    Very powerful, Ethan – I was gripped by this! Excellent work, well done!