A Titanic Complaint!

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We read ‘Titanic Diary’ by Lauren in Brookfields School, Birmingham and loved how she managed to combine information with an entertaining style. We analysed Lauren’s character and then wrote some letters of complaint to White Star Line in role as Lauren. This is Sasha’s effort, which I think really shows a clear character! We hope you enjoy, and Lauren, if you’re reading, thanks for inspiring our lesson today!

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  1. Wow. Magnificent writing Sasha. I am impressed by your use of emotions and feelings. Keep it up!

  2. Uma (United Kingdom) on said:

    What an excellent, well written and historically accurate letter. You should be very proud!

  3. AnnaLMYL (United Kingdom) on said:

    Sasha, what a spectacular letter! Congratulations you should be very proud! I’m sure Lauren at Brookfields School will be thrilled to see she has inspired you :-)

  4. groveroad on said:

    A Titanic effort! This is superb! Inspirational work, Sasha!